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Old 05-27-2024, 06:27 PM
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Hi everyone!
Some years ago I've wrote this song, including the chords and solo
However arthritis doesn't allow me to play anymore
So I got it written for a while but if someone would like and like to help me out to hear how this would sound, I would love it.

Em C G D
In the night, when the world is sleeping,
Em C G D
I feel your warmth, burning on my skin,
Em C G D
In the silence, your whispers creeping,
Em C G D
Every kiss from you, a sweet, sweet spin.

Prechorus:

Bm G D A
And in the dark, I find the light,
Bm G D A
Every heartbeat, a rhythm so tight,
Bm G D A
Lost in your eyes, no turning back,
Bm G D A
My heart's on fire, under your attack.

Chorus:

G D
7800° Fahrenheit,
Em C
Our love is a fire that won't fade away,
G D
Every touch, a blast in the night,
Em C
You're my passion, my endless sway.

Verse 2:

Em C G D
In the wind, I hear your name,
Em C G D
Your love burns, I can't escape,
Em C G D
In every star, I see your flame,
Em C G D
You're my desire, my dreamscape.

Prechorus and chorus the same

Bridge:
Bm D
In every dawn, I find your love,
A G
You're my life, my sun, my song,
Bm D
7800° of pure devotion,
A F#m
You're my fire, my everlasting emotion.

Solo:

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--7h8-7--------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------9b11--9--7----7h9p7----7h9p7----7h9p7-----------------|
D|--------------------9---------9--------9---------9------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--10b12r10--8--7------------------------------------------------|
G|-------------------9--7--9b11r9--7--9--7------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--7h8-7--------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------9b11--9--7--9/11--11/12--12/14-------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|

e|--12--10h12--10--9--------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------12--10h12--10--8--------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------9-----------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------|

e|--12b14--12--10--9----9/10--9---------------------------------|
B|------------------------12------10----------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------11b12--9--7----------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------|

Chorus.

The bpm could be 75 (original) or go to 80

Much appreciated for whoever wants to help me with this

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Old 05-27-2024, 07:16 PM
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Hi everyone!
Some years ago I've wrote this song, including the chords and solo
However arthritis doesn't allow me to play anymore
So I got it written for a while but if someone would like and like to help me out to hear how this would sound, I would love it.

Em C G D
In the night, when the world is sleeping,
Em C G D
I feel your warmth, burning on my skin,
Em C G D
In the silence, your whispers creeping,
Em C G D
Every kiss from you, a sweet, sweet spin.

Prechorus:

Bm G D A
And in the dark, I find the light,
Bm G D A
Every heartbeat, a rhythm so tight,
Bm G D A
Lost in your eyes, no turning back,
Bm G D A
My heart's on fire, under your attack.

Chorus:

G D
7800° Fahrenheit,
Em C
Our love is a fire that won't fade away,
G D
Every touch, a blast in the night,
Em C
You're my passion, my endless sway.

Verse 2:

Em C G D
In the wind, I hear your name,
Em C G D
Your love burns, I can't escape,
Em C G D
In every star, I see your flame,
Em C G D
You're my desire, my dreamscape.

Prechorus and chorus the same

Bridge:
Bm D
In every dawn, I find your love,
A G
You're my life, my sun, my song,
Bm D
7800° of pure devotion,
A F#m
You're my fire, my everlasting emotion.

Solo:

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--7h8-7--------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------9b11--9--7----7h9p7----7h9p7----7h9p7-----------------|
D|--------------------9---------9--------9---------9------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--10b12r10--8--7------------------------------------------------|
G|-------------------9--7--9b11r9--7--9--7------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|

e|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--7h8-7--------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------9b11--9--7--9/11--11/12--12/14-------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|

e|--12--10h12--10--9--------------------------------------------|
B|--------------------12--10h12--10--8--------------------------|
G|--------------------------------------9-----------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------|

e|--12b14--12--10--9----9/10--9---------------------------------|
B|------------------------12------10----------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------11b12--9--7----------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------------------------|

Chorus.

The bpm could be 75 (original) or go to 80

Much appreciated for whoever wants to help me with this
I'm happy to give this a go..could be fun!

I'm presuming the verses are half bars so Em C | G D?
Also solo over the verse chords or something different?
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Old 05-27-2024, 07:39 PM
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I'm happy to give this a go..could be fun!

I'm presuming the verses are half bars so Em C | G D?
Also solo over the verse chords or something different?

Firstly, I truly appreciate your interest. To be honest, I don't quite remember the details since I only have the Notepad document from 2003, so feel free to let your imagination soar. The concept is to have the solo after the bridge to introduce tension points and prevent it from sounding too flat. If you have any additional ideas to add, feel free to share. I enjoy hearing others' creativity. Additionally, I could reach out to a contact who is knowledgeable about AI to give Jon's voice. While this idea may seem a bit unconventional, it could hold some promise for the future.
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